Game 4 review
Here's Trader jack's thoughts on Friday's game. Greinke wins again.?.? http://wp.me/pQLYQ-13
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Okay
I’m not trying to be mean. I honestly want things to go better for you because I respect people trying to make it on their own like this, so do you want someone to help edit these? At least type it up in Word or something so you can catch (most of) the spelling errors and make it a bit more legible.
by MinnesotaRoyal on Apr 10, 2010 11:28 AM EDT reply actions 1 recs
If he posts one of these for every game,
then maybe it will be time to start being mean.
14 total posts here over a year, and we’re supposed to care what you think? We don’t even know who you are.
Step up your analysis beyond post game fan radio call in show “analysis” and maybe we’ll pay attention. An editing of your work also wouldn’t hurt, like MinnesotaRoyal suggests.
This is very blunt, hopefully you take this criticism and improve your blog.
I don't think most people here have any problem with someone
pimping his own blog on RR…as long as it’s good, insightful, entertaining and/or interesting. Even with that being said, a complete lack of any interaction on this site isn’t going to ingratiate you with the regulars here.
And I agree with MN Royal and AxDxMx: Try writing something of substance, with some actual analysis beyond “that was a nice jack.” Also, expanding your writing style to more than “Twitterese” would be helpful. People are going to expect full, complete (and maybe even “artful”) sentences in something besides a tweet.
"Now…put that in your [BLEEP]ing pipe and smoke it." -Hal McRae
"I was doing this when BJ was in his father's nutsack." -Renzo Gracie
by Sweep_the_Leg on Apr 10, 2010 1:54 PM EDT up reply actions
Actually, another suggestion
You should take part in things that happen here. Maybe it will help you think about it more and get more in depth. Jump in on the game threads and interact with everyone. It’ll help more than just dropping by to link to your posts.
by MinnesotaRoyal on Apr 10, 2010 12:49 PM EDT reply actions 1 recs
yes to this
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by MarioVanPeebles Republic of China on Apr 10, 2010 5:42 PM EDT up reply actions
Poor mans Carl Crawford?
How so? If I was thinking of a poor mans Carl Crawford the first thing Id think of is speed, and stealing bases, neither of which Dejesus does well
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